Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
My Cybersmart Animation
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Awesome animation Daisy!
ReplyDeleteGood Work Daisy.
ReplyDeleteWhy did you choose to do a animation on "Monday Morning".
I really liked your animation because it was quite funny, it was interesting, and it had high level of detail
Next time you could add your characters at a swimming pool and play in it.
From Zoe.W
Thank you Zoë, I like you feedback. next time I probably will do a pool.
DeleteKia Ora, Daisy! I absolutely love your animation! Also, I found the secret "SUP" Maybe next time you could show them trying on clothes instead of just doing another time skip. Also I found it really funny that they said they said they went overboard when the bags were tiny! That's it, I hope you have a nice day~
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy, I really liked the way you put some humour in you animation. It makes me think about the first time I made an animation (which is a good thing!) maybe you could make the words stay up longer. Zara!
ReplyDeleteHi Daisy I really liked the way you put some humour in your animation. It makes me think of the first time I made an animation (which is a good thing!) Maybe next time you could make the words stay up longer. Zara
Hi Daisy! I really enjoyed the part when they went to the mall and when they brought to much clothes.< why did you call the clothes delicious?>
ReplyDeleteHello daisy
ReplyDeleteI liked how they fought about driving
Did you think about the funny story line
why did you chose The pumkin latte
Rosara
good job try some more out of this world stuff
ReplyDeleteKia ora Daisy, I loved this animation especially the part where they argued about driving the car, this reminded me of what I do after school sometimes, next time you could keep the speech bubbles up for longer, thank you for sharing this to us.
ReplyDelete-Zoe-
Kia Ora Daisy,
ReplyDeleteI really liked you animation it was so funny,next time you could make them go inside starbucks and so we can see what they get,although you do very good animations
-Olivia-