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Tuesday, April 2, 2019

My Cybersmart Animation

                                            Here is my Google Animation that I made for cybersmart in school. I made it using Google Slides! It is not finished. Have you ever made an animation before? Please let me know how I can improve in the comments! remember, your feedback is very important!!

10 comments:

  1. Good Work Daisy.
    Why did you choose to do a animation on "Monday Morning".

    I really liked your animation because it was quite funny, it was interesting, and it had high level of detail

    Next time you could add your characters at a swimming pool and play in it.

    From Zoe.W

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    1. Thank you Zoë, I like you feedback. next time I probably will do a pool.

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  2. Kia Ora, Daisy! I absolutely love your animation! Also, I found the secret "SUP" Maybe next time you could show them trying on clothes instead of just doing another time skip. Also I found it really funny that they said they said they went overboard when the bags were tiny! That's it, I hope you have a nice day~

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  3. Hi Daisy, I really liked the way you put some humour in you animation. It makes me think about the first time I made an animation (which is a good thing!) maybe you could make the words stay up longer. Zara!








































































































































    Hi Daisy I really liked the way you put some humour in your animation. It makes me think of the first time I made an animation (which is a good thing!) Maybe next time you could make the words stay up longer. Zara







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  4. Hi Daisy! I really enjoyed the part when they went to the mall and when they brought to much clothes.< why did you call the clothes delicious?>

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  5. Hello daisy
    I liked how they fought about driving
    Did you think about the funny story line
    why did you chose The pumkin latte

    Rosara

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  6. good job try some more out of this world stuff

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  7. Kia ora Daisy, I loved this animation especially the part where they argued about driving the car, this reminded me of what I do after school sometimes, next time you could keep the speech bubbles up for longer, thank you for sharing this to us.
    -Zoe-

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  8. Kia Ora Daisy,
    I really liked you animation it was so funny,next time you could make them go inside starbucks and so we can see what they get,although you do very good animations
    -Olivia-

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