Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, June 26, 2019
Exploding Volcanoes
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Wow Daisy its really cool but next time can you please add a question.
ReplyDeleteHi Tilly, Thank you for commenting on my post, the question was in the description and its was 'have you ever seen an explosion or a volcano before?' but than you for your feedback!
Deletegood job I really like it you did everything perfectly maybe some wow words next time but good job irate it 9/10
ReplyDeleteHi daisy,
ReplyDeleteYour report is amazing with great information.
Next time you could add some more pictures.
great job!